Finally hit the title page. Also got to unveil some of the new technology  and differences I have in store for this story. The traffic in the street is being caused by something pretty significant.

I already think I’m getting better at making things look “period.” We’ll see as time goes on. i’ll probably look back and continue to laugh.

I have to admit, I think I have already learned a bit more about pacing and making sure that I get a decent amount into the panels every half page. It’s pretty tough. Imagine you have just four sentences to tell me a complete story. That’s about one sentence per panel. So yeah, four sentences. Now, tell me a story with those four sentences, or even a complete thought, for that matter. It’s a fun challenge. I like it a lot. As you can tell from my writing by now, it’s quite a bit challenge for a guy like me.